This just in: the teaching team has gone through all the portfolios and has graded them. Here is the feedback they gave me. đ
Hi Heli,
Since you wrote your portfolio in English, we are going to give the feedback in English as well. It’s interesting to see the wide variety of portfolio styles, yours is the first done as blog, and first one in English. We remember that you mentioned your passion for English language already in class so happy to see you were able to bring the passion to this portfolio as well.
There are plenty of things that we would like to cover in our feedback but we can’t do them all so instead we will have random thoughts below after reading each blog post. First, we like your sentence: “lack of willpower once you realize that the prize is not "just around the corner"” – indeed, while there are some quick wins, reaching sustainability it’s a long-term process and brings to mind Helsinki Bus Station theory (you can read about it here: https://www.theguardian.com/lifeandstyle/2013/feb/23/change-life-helsinki-bus-station-theory) – it’s not around the corner but requires both work and commitment.
Also, it is important to point out that you came to this class to learn and it would be hard to find people who would have all the knowledge about sustainability, responsibility and even more so about transformative learning – all topics are so wide and deep that one could dedicate their life to studying these topics. We were hoping to plant a seed and let you start your journey, as you put it, down the rabbit hole.
Cost of being carbon neutral – yes, it is not going to be free to make the change but at the same time, we also have to take environmental costs into an account. It is hard to make any predictions about the war in Ukraine at the moment but some climate experts have suggested that it could fast-track us to more carbon neutral societies. It remains to be seen, and of course, the price is extremely high in lost human lifes and other devastation.
Good discussion about Tarja Ketola’s book (which in terms of sustainability is already quite dated but it covers the most important aspects). Environmental aspect of sustainability is quite clear, at least the basic aspects are, but social can be harder to grasp. We have it good in Finland, but if we go a bit beyond what we see – those clothes that we buy come from factories that are likely quite far from being ethical, some of the food items we eat (bananas, tomatoes etc.) have a long history of abuse etc. We need to look the big picture.
Quite impressive how your updated mind map is already looking much more complete than the one in the beginning – indeed, trust the process as you mentioned in the beginning! All in all, we definitely enjoyed your reflective portfolio a lot. This was exactly what we were hoping for – not some polished Word document where everything appeared perfect but description of your path with positive and negative experiences. Well done, Heli! We gave you grade 5.
All the best for your studies!
Teaching team